Creating effective B2B marketing illustrations
Creating effective B2B marketing illustrations
Creating effective B2B marketing illustrations
CONTENT CREATION
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Bryan Reid



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Bryan Reid
While reading stories to my kids when they were young, I realized that some of our best B2B marketing work was essentially creating “picture books for adults”. When you’re trying to share information with a prospect about a new, complex technological solution they have never heard of before, it’s hard to overstate the value of an intuitive illustration that creates that “A ha!” moment in their mind.
At Altitude, we take pride in our ability to devise and design simple, intuitive, audience-specific illustrations that help bring a solution or topic to life for the audience. I would never venture to say that we’re the best at it, but we have created enough illustrations over the past 20 years to have learned a few things along the way.
Here are some thoughts on our approach that have allowed us to create B2B illustrations for our clients with lasting value. These same illustrations have been frequently repurposed in multiple forms of digital content, from websites to pitch decks, video, infographics, sales enablement guides, product briefs, etc.

1. Understand the intended audience and their level of expertise: While self-evident, this point can easily be overlooked, particularly by internal individuals who are intimately familiar with their solutions. We frequently encounter process diagrams developed by technical teams that clearly resonate among their colleagues but become overly complex or challenging for external audiences, often due to the inclusion of icons or process flows that aren't immediately intuitive or self-explanatory.
Even a technical audience might be confused by an illustration that uses visual elements they aren’t familiar with. That is even more true when the target is a non-technical executive.

2. Know the single purpose: What is the one job the illustration needs to do? Is it to show how a solution works or how it is architected? ? Is it to bring the value of the solution to life in a business use case the prospect will recognize? In the words of a popular craft brewery here in Canada (Steamwhistle), we believe an effective B2B illustration should focus on “doing one thing, really, really well”. It’s better to create two illustrations for different purposes than to try to create one that does a mediocre job of both.
3. What’s important? Secondary? Unnecessary?: Less is definitely more when it comes to creating intuitive illustrations. What are the essential components that have to be included? Make sure they stand out and are the focus of the illustration. What additional elements are required to provide context or emphasize a point? Include them but ensure they don’t compete for the user’s attention with the essential elements. What visuals, if included, will end up being more distracting than informative? Leave those out. Some of our best illustrations are so simple they look like they took minimal time to create, but it took considerable thought, discussion and revision to arrive at the final version.
4. Get the concept right, then design: Before a B2B illustration is ever designed at Altitude, there is a preliminary stage where a rudimentary version of the illustration is ‘mocked up’ by one of our content experts. This serves a key purpose, as it allows us to test our assumptions with the client regarding our understanding of the process, flow, architecture, and use cases, as well as the elements the illustration needs to include (or exclude), before investing time in design.
If we immediately design an image without this stage, it’s easy for us and the client to fall in love with how it looks, without asking if it truly serves its purpose for the target audience.
5. Test it: In an ideal world, you could test an illustration with members of the target audience but that’s not always an option. Instead, run it by someone else on your team or an industry “friendly” who has no involvement in the project. If it’s clear enough to make sense to them, odds are it will work for your audience.

6. Create an Image Library: Consider the value of having multiple illustrations that focus on a central theme, and the many ways they can be leveraged. We originally created this group of 29 AT&T Cybersecurity use cases for sales enablement training purposes, but they were quickly repurposed for use across the website, and a variety of digital channels. Carrie Cassée, former Director, Marketing Management at AT&T Cybersecurity and experienced cybersecurity marketing leader, shared:
“Investing the time upfront to collaborate with the Altitude team helped us to clearly define our audiences and use cases. Once they were complete, we realized we could extend the value of our investment, by activating this library of intuitive, audience-specific illustrations across multiple marketing and sales enablement channels.”
Creating an effective B2B illustration isn’t easy and often includes a lot of trial and error but the results can be incredibly rewarding and have lasting value across multiple content formats. I hope these tips were useful to you.
If you’d like to learn more about how Altitude Management can help you create effective B2B marketing illustrations, please reach out to Jennifer Throop.
At Altitude, we’re focused on creating content that delivers the ‘most relevant information’, in the shortest amount of time.
While reading stories to my kids when they were young, I realized that some of our best B2B marketing work was essentially creating “picture books for adults”. When you’re trying to share information with a prospect about a new, complex technological solution they have never heard of before, it’s hard to overstate the value of an intuitive illustration that creates that “A ha!” moment in their mind.
At Altitude, we take pride in our ability to devise and design simple, intuitive, audience-specific illustrations that help bring a solution or topic to life for the audience. I would never venture to say that we’re the best at it, but we have created enough illustrations over the past 20 years to have learned a few things along the way.
Here are some thoughts on our approach that have allowed us to create B2B illustrations for our clients with lasting value. These same illustrations have been frequently repurposed in multiple forms of digital content, from websites to pitch decks, video, infographics, sales enablement guides, product briefs, etc.

1. Understand the intended audience and their level of expertise: While self-evident, this point can easily be overlooked, particularly by internal individuals who are intimately familiar with their solutions. We frequently encounter process diagrams developed by technical teams that clearly resonate among their colleagues but become overly complex or challenging for external audiences, often due to the inclusion of icons or process flows that aren't immediately intuitive or self-explanatory.
Even a technical audience might be confused by an illustration that uses visual elements they aren’t familiar with. That is even more true when the target is a non-technical executive.

2. Know the single purpose: What is the one job the illustration needs to do? Is it to show how a solution works or how it is architected? ? Is it to bring the value of the solution to life in a business use case the prospect will recognize? In the words of a popular craft brewery here in Canada (Steamwhistle), we believe an effective B2B illustration should focus on “doing one thing, really, really well”. It’s better to create two illustrations for different purposes than to try to create one that does a mediocre job of both.
3. What’s important? Secondary? Unnecessary?: Less is definitely more when it comes to creating intuitive illustrations. What are the essential components that have to be included? Make sure they stand out and are the focus of the illustration. What additional elements are required to provide context or emphasize a point? Include them but ensure they don’t compete for the user’s attention with the essential elements. What visuals, if included, will end up being more distracting than informative? Leave those out. Some of our best illustrations are so simple they look like they took minimal time to create, but it took considerable thought, discussion and revision to arrive at the final version.
4. Get the concept right, then design: Before a B2B illustration is ever designed at Altitude, there is a preliminary stage where a rudimentary version of the illustration is ‘mocked up’ by one of our content experts. This serves a key purpose, as it allows us to test our assumptions with the client regarding our understanding of the process, flow, architecture, and use cases, as well as the elements the illustration needs to include (or exclude), before investing time in design.
If we immediately design an image without this stage, it’s easy for us and the client to fall in love with how it looks, without asking if it truly serves its purpose for the target audience.
5. Test it: In an ideal world, you could test an illustration with members of the target audience but that’s not always an option. Instead, run it by someone else on your team or an industry “friendly” who has no involvement in the project. If it’s clear enough to make sense to them, odds are it will work for your audience.

6. Create an Image Library: Consider the value of having multiple illustrations that focus on a central theme, and the many ways they can be leveraged. We originally created this group of 29 AT&T Cybersecurity use cases for sales enablement training purposes, but they were quickly repurposed for use across the website, and a variety of digital channels. Carrie Cassée, former Director, Marketing Management at AT&T Cybersecurity and experienced cybersecurity marketing leader, shared:
“Investing the time upfront to collaborate with the Altitude team helped us to clearly define our audiences and use cases. Once they were complete, we realized we could extend the value of our investment, by activating this library of intuitive, audience-specific illustrations across multiple marketing and sales enablement channels.”
Creating an effective B2B illustration isn’t easy and often includes a lot of trial and error but the results can be incredibly rewarding and have lasting value across multiple content formats. I hope these tips were useful to you.
If you’d like to learn more about how Altitude Management can help you create effective B2B marketing illustrations, please reach out to Jennifer Throop.
At Altitude, we’re focused on creating content that delivers the ‘most relevant information’, in the shortest amount of time.




Ready to move your
B2B buyers forward?
Contact Altitude today to clarify your complex solutions—so your B2B audience quickly understands, trusts, and takes action.
Copyright © 2025 Altitude Management.
All rights reserved.




Ready to move your
B2B buyers forward?
Contact Altitude today to clarify your complex solutions—so your B2B audience quickly understands, trusts, and takes action.
Copyright © 2025 Altitude Management.
All rights reserved.




Ready to move your
B2B buyers forward?
Contact Altitude today to clarify your complex solutions—so your B2B audience quickly understands, trusts, and takes action.
Copyright © 2025 Altitude Management.
All rights reserved.

CONTENT STRATEGY
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Bryan Reid
At Altitude, we’ve reviewed over 1,200 pieces of marketing content created by 12 cybersecurity leaders. Where possible, we’ve categorized each piece of content, based on its age, readability, and type.
In two previous articles we provided you with insights on content age and content readability.
Content age: In a constantly evolving industry like cybersecurity, content can quickly become out-of-date, as solutions improve and new challenges arise.
Content readability: Cybersecurity is complex enough. Content that is hard to read will either be quickly ignored, or fail to convey key messaging.
In this article, we consider the importance of having the right mix of content type for each cybersecurity solution you are marketing.
The Buyer’s Journey: Content Type Value by Journey Stage
With multiple stakeholders typically involved in the B2B buying process, having easily shareable content at each of these stages is highly valuable. Different content types have been found to be better suited for the early (awareness), middle (consideration) and late (decision) stages of the buying journey.
In the 2023 Content Preferences Survey Report from DemandGen, the most valuable content at each buying stage includes:
Early Stage: Webinars, research reports, blog posts, whitepapers, e-books and infographics
Middle Stage: Case studies, analyst reports, webinars and rich content media like video
Late Stage: Demos, user reviews, ROI calculators and caste studies
What We Found
We chose the following 13 leaders in the cybersecurity space:
AT&T Cybersecurity
Akamai Technologies
Broadcom Inc.
Check Point
CrowdStrike
DXC Technology
F5 Networks
IBM
Palo Alto Networks
Secureworks
Sentinel One
Trend Micro
Zscaler
Then we reviewed their cybersecurity-focused product and solution webpages to discover what contents types they were leveraging in their marketing efforts.
The findings below reflect the overall averages and the actual data we gathered from three of the companies reviewed.

If we take a quick look at these three sample companies, compared to the overall average of all companies reviewed:
Company A: Leans into whitepapers, analyst reports, eBooks and infographics
Company B: Skews towards a higher percentage of solution briefs and webinars
Company C: Has a higher percentage of videos, analyst reports and webinars
Without the context of knowing the individual strategies of these companies, we can only speculate as to whether they have the optimal mix, and whether these choices were deliberate. One thing we have noticed in our work with clients, is that personnel changes due to departures, re-organizations, etc. can often result in individual marketers not being aware of their full inventory of content.
If you put yourself in the position of one of these companies, it might be worth asking what potential value could:
Additional explainer videos deliver for company A, in the middle stage of the buyer’s journey?
Investment in analyst reports deliver for company B, in the early and middle stages?
A few infographics deliver for company C, in the early stages?
Your answers would surely vary but we found sharing this data with marketing leaders can generate a lively discussion and a wealth of ideas. I’d highly recommend taking the time to do a quick survey of your content and see what your mix looks like. While this data is at a company level, we also found reviewing it at an individual solution or portfolio level also generates some interesting insights. Often, it becomes clear that some valuable product or solution has been underserved from a marketing perspective.
If you’d like to learn more about the findings of our research, please reach out to Jennifer Throop.
At Altitude, we’re focused on creating content that delivers the ‘most relevant information’, in the shortest amount of time.

CONTENT STRATEGY
/
Bryan Reid
At Altitude, we’ve reviewed over 1,200 pieces of marketing content created by 12 cybersecurity leaders. Where possible, we’ve categorized each piece of content, based on its age, readability, and type.
In two previous articles we provided you with insights on content age and content readability.
Content age: In a constantly evolving industry like cybersecurity, content can quickly become out-of-date, as solutions improve and new challenges arise.
Content readability: Cybersecurity is complex enough. Content that is hard to read will either be quickly ignored, or fail to convey key messaging.
In this article, we consider the importance of having the right mix of content type for each cybersecurity solution you are marketing.
The Buyer’s Journey: Content Type Value by Journey Stage
With multiple stakeholders typically involved in the B2B buying process, having easily shareable content at each of these stages is highly valuable. Different content types have been found to be better suited for the early (awareness), middle (consideration) and late (decision) stages of the buying journey.
In the 2023 Content Preferences Survey Report from DemandGen, the most valuable content at each buying stage includes:
Early Stage: Webinars, research reports, blog posts, whitepapers, e-books and infographics
Middle Stage: Case studies, analyst reports, webinars and rich content media like video
Late Stage: Demos, user reviews, ROI calculators and caste studies
What We Found
We chose the following 13 leaders in the cybersecurity space:
AT&T Cybersecurity
Akamai Technologies
Broadcom Inc.
Check Point
CrowdStrike
DXC Technology
F5 Networks
IBM
Palo Alto Networks
Secureworks
Sentinel One
Trend Micro
Zscaler
Then we reviewed their cybersecurity-focused product and solution webpages to discover what contents types they were leveraging in their marketing efforts.
The findings below reflect the overall averages and the actual data we gathered from three of the companies reviewed.

If we take a quick look at these three sample companies, compared to the overall average of all companies reviewed:
Company A: Leans into whitepapers, analyst reports, eBooks and infographics
Company B: Skews towards a higher percentage of solution briefs and webinars
Company C: Has a higher percentage of videos, analyst reports and webinars
Without the context of knowing the individual strategies of these companies, we can only speculate as to whether they have the optimal mix, and whether these choices were deliberate. One thing we have noticed in our work with clients, is that personnel changes due to departures, re-organizations, etc. can often result in individual marketers not being aware of their full inventory of content.
If you put yourself in the position of one of these companies, it might be worth asking what potential value could:
Additional explainer videos deliver for company A, in the middle stage of the buyer’s journey?
Investment in analyst reports deliver for company B, in the early and middle stages?
A few infographics deliver for company C, in the early stages?
Your answers would surely vary but we found sharing this data with marketing leaders can generate a lively discussion and a wealth of ideas. I’d highly recommend taking the time to do a quick survey of your content and see what your mix looks like. While this data is at a company level, we also found reviewing it at an individual solution or portfolio level also generates some interesting insights. Often, it becomes clear that some valuable product or solution has been underserved from a marketing perspective.
If you’d like to learn more about the findings of our research, please reach out to Jennifer Throop.
At Altitude, we’re focused on creating content that delivers the ‘most relevant information’, in the shortest amount of time.

CONTENT STRATEGY
/
Bryan Reid
At Altitude, we’ve reviewed over 1,200 pieces of marketing content created by 12 cybersecurity leaders. Where possible, we’ve categorized each piece of content, based on its age, readability, and type.
In two previous articles we provided you with insights on content age and content readability.
Content age: In a constantly evolving industry like cybersecurity, content can quickly become out-of-date, as solutions improve and new challenges arise.
Content readability: Cybersecurity is complex enough. Content that is hard to read will either be quickly ignored, or fail to convey key messaging.
In this article, we consider the importance of having the right mix of content type for each cybersecurity solution you are marketing.
The Buyer’s Journey: Content Type Value by Journey Stage
With multiple stakeholders typically involved in the B2B buying process, having easily shareable content at each of these stages is highly valuable. Different content types have been found to be better suited for the early (awareness), middle (consideration) and late (decision) stages of the buying journey.
In the 2023 Content Preferences Survey Report from DemandGen, the most valuable content at each buying stage includes:
Early Stage: Webinars, research reports, blog posts, whitepapers, e-books and infographics
Middle Stage: Case studies, analyst reports, webinars and rich content media like video
Late Stage: Demos, user reviews, ROI calculators and caste studies
What We Found
We chose the following 13 leaders in the cybersecurity space:
AT&T Cybersecurity
Akamai Technologies
Broadcom Inc.
Check Point
CrowdStrike
DXC Technology
F5 Networks
IBM
Palo Alto Networks
Secureworks
Sentinel One
Trend Micro
Zscaler
Then we reviewed their cybersecurity-focused product and solution webpages to discover what contents types they were leveraging in their marketing efforts.
The findings below reflect the overall averages and the actual data we gathered from three of the companies reviewed.

If we take a quick look at these three sample companies, compared to the overall average of all companies reviewed:
Company A: Leans into whitepapers, analyst reports, eBooks and infographics
Company B: Skews towards a higher percentage of solution briefs and webinars
Company C: Has a higher percentage of videos, analyst reports and webinars
Without the context of knowing the individual strategies of these companies, we can only speculate as to whether they have the optimal mix, and whether these choices were deliberate. One thing we have noticed in our work with clients, is that personnel changes due to departures, re-organizations, etc. can often result in individual marketers not being aware of their full inventory of content.
If you put yourself in the position of one of these companies, it might be worth asking what potential value could:
Additional explainer videos deliver for company A, in the middle stage of the buyer’s journey?
Investment in analyst reports deliver for company B, in the early and middle stages?
A few infographics deliver for company C, in the early stages?
Your answers would surely vary but we found sharing this data with marketing leaders can generate a lively discussion and a wealth of ideas. I’d highly recommend taking the time to do a quick survey of your content and see what your mix looks like. While this data is at a company level, we also found reviewing it at an individual solution or portfolio level also generates some interesting insights. Often, it becomes clear that some valuable product or solution has been underserved from a marketing perspective.
If you’d like to learn more about the findings of our research, please reach out to Jennifer Throop.
At Altitude, we’re focused on creating content that delivers the ‘most relevant information’, in the shortest amount of time.

CONTENT CREATION
/
Bryan Reid
Have you ever started reading a news article…and stopped because it was simply too much effort? I know I have, and then I turned to some other news article or distraction.
Do you think your prospects have ever quit reading a piece of cybersecurity marketing content because it was too much effort?
According to Ben Sawyer, an assistant professor in the University of Central Florida's Department of Industrial Engineering and Management Systems and director of the Readability Consortium, a group working on readability research:

“Marketers need to think about their content as teaching tools. A failure to teach a prospective customer about their products or services is a failure to demonstrate the opportunity that whatever they’re selling can benefit the customer’s work or personal life.”
What is the impact on your marketing, if as many as 67% of the people who started reading it, quit?
The importance of readability
Having a powerful value proposition and set of key messages is clearly important when marketing a cybersecurity solution. We all know that and invest time in that effort. But how much time do we invest in how we communicate those messages, and in particular, in the words we choose?
At Altitude we recently used Readable.com, a service that scores content using standard readability metrics, to scan over 1,000+ pieces of cybersecurity content from 10 leading providers. The results were revealing. We’ll share more about them in a future article.
While the readability scoring likely isn’t perfect (e.g. it may not recognize more common cybersecurity-specific terms, it can’t evaluate the value of supporting graphics), it gives a reasonable indication of how easy it is to read cybersecurity marketing content.
Losing your audience. The impact of poor readability
To help you understand the potential impact of poor readability, here’s a paragraph from a piece of content we scored, with the company’s name replaced.
“When combined with CYBERCO’s Security Monitoring, Vulnerability Scanning automatically correlates security events with scan data. The enriched data reduces false positives and provides further context to CYBERCO security operations center (SOC) analysts for improved incident handling and response. You gain an integrated view of your risk posture and insight for thwarting future attacks.”
And here’s the score. On a readability grading scale from A to E, this one scored an E. More importantly, readable estimates that it is only ‘easily readable’ for 33% of the potential audience.
Theoretically, that means 67% of people will be somewhat challenged to read the above paragraph. Many will simply choose not to and move on to something else.
I would bet that if any one of us ran a café, and we saw 2 out of 3 potential customers line up and then walk away without buying, we would immediately make a change to our business model. Just because we may not be able to see that people aren’t finishing our content, doesn’t mean that it’s not happening to us as well.
As Sawyer points out: Simplifying content might be the way to reach larger audiences. Between the amount of digital noise Americans must endure and the differing abilities of individual readers, too-complex content tends to get lost.
Ensuring your content is more readable makes great business sense because you will engage more potential customers!
In Josh Bernoff’s book about writing clarity, Writing Without Bullshit, a book I highly recommend, he coined the Iron Imperative: Do not waste the reader’s time, and the Golden Corollary: Treat the reader’s time as more valuable than your own.
Very wise words. If we all did that, how much more readable would our cybersecurity content be?
You might be wondering…how did this article score? Not perfectly, but a bit better than the cybersecurity example!
At Altitude, we’re focused on creating content that delivers the ‘most relevant information’, in the shortest amount of time.

CONTENT CREATION
/
Bryan Reid
Have you ever started reading a news article…and stopped because it was simply too much effort? I know I have, and then I turned to some other news article or distraction.
Do you think your prospects have ever quit reading a piece of cybersecurity marketing content because it was too much effort?
According to Ben Sawyer, an assistant professor in the University of Central Florida's Department of Industrial Engineering and Management Systems and director of the Readability Consortium, a group working on readability research:

“Marketers need to think about their content as teaching tools. A failure to teach a prospective customer about their products or services is a failure to demonstrate the opportunity that whatever they’re selling can benefit the customer’s work or personal life.”
What is the impact on your marketing, if as many as 67% of the people who started reading it, quit?
The importance of readability
Having a powerful value proposition and set of key messages is clearly important when marketing a cybersecurity solution. We all know that and invest time in that effort. But how much time do we invest in how we communicate those messages, and in particular, in the words we choose?
At Altitude we recently used Readable.com, a service that scores content using standard readability metrics, to scan over 1,000+ pieces of cybersecurity content from 10 leading providers. The results were revealing. We’ll share more about them in a future article.
While the readability scoring likely isn’t perfect (e.g. it may not recognize more common cybersecurity-specific terms, it can’t evaluate the value of supporting graphics), it gives a reasonable indication of how easy it is to read cybersecurity marketing content.
Losing your audience. The impact of poor readability
To help you understand the potential impact of poor readability, here’s a paragraph from a piece of content we scored, with the company’s name replaced.
“When combined with CYBERCO’s Security Monitoring, Vulnerability Scanning automatically correlates security events with scan data. The enriched data reduces false positives and provides further context to CYBERCO security operations center (SOC) analysts for improved incident handling and response. You gain an integrated view of your risk posture and insight for thwarting future attacks.”
And here’s the score. On a readability grading scale from A to E, this one scored an E. More importantly, readable estimates that it is only ‘easily readable’ for 33% of the potential audience.
Theoretically, that means 67% of people will be somewhat challenged to read the above paragraph. Many will simply choose not to and move on to something else.
I would bet that if any one of us ran a café, and we saw 2 out of 3 potential customers line up and then walk away without buying, we would immediately make a change to our business model. Just because we may not be able to see that people aren’t finishing our content, doesn’t mean that it’s not happening to us as well.
As Sawyer points out: Simplifying content might be the way to reach larger audiences. Between the amount of digital noise Americans must endure and the differing abilities of individual readers, too-complex content tends to get lost.
Ensuring your content is more readable makes great business sense because you will engage more potential customers!
In Josh Bernoff’s book about writing clarity, Writing Without Bullshit, a book I highly recommend, he coined the Iron Imperative: Do not waste the reader’s time, and the Golden Corollary: Treat the reader’s time as more valuable than your own.
Very wise words. If we all did that, how much more readable would our cybersecurity content be?
You might be wondering…how did this article score? Not perfectly, but a bit better than the cybersecurity example!
At Altitude, we’re focused on creating content that delivers the ‘most relevant information’, in the shortest amount of time.

CONTENT CREATION
/
Bryan Reid
Have you ever started reading a news article…and stopped because it was simply too much effort? I know I have, and then I turned to some other news article or distraction.
Do you think your prospects have ever quit reading a piece of cybersecurity marketing content because it was too much effort?
According to Ben Sawyer, an assistant professor in the University of Central Florida's Department of Industrial Engineering and Management Systems and director of the Readability Consortium, a group working on readability research:

“Marketers need to think about their content as teaching tools. A failure to teach a prospective customer about their products or services is a failure to demonstrate the opportunity that whatever they’re selling can benefit the customer’s work or personal life.”
What is the impact on your marketing, if as many as 67% of the people who started reading it, quit?
The importance of readability
Having a powerful value proposition and set of key messages is clearly important when marketing a cybersecurity solution. We all know that and invest time in that effort. But how much time do we invest in how we communicate those messages, and in particular, in the words we choose?
At Altitude we recently used Readable.com, a service that scores content using standard readability metrics, to scan over 1,000+ pieces of cybersecurity content from 10 leading providers. The results were revealing. We’ll share more about them in a future article.
While the readability scoring likely isn’t perfect (e.g. it may not recognize more common cybersecurity-specific terms, it can’t evaluate the value of supporting graphics), it gives a reasonable indication of how easy it is to read cybersecurity marketing content.
Losing your audience. The impact of poor readability
To help you understand the potential impact of poor readability, here’s a paragraph from a piece of content we scored, with the company’s name replaced.
“When combined with CYBERCO’s Security Monitoring, Vulnerability Scanning automatically correlates security events with scan data. The enriched data reduces false positives and provides further context to CYBERCO security operations center (SOC) analysts for improved incident handling and response. You gain an integrated view of your risk posture and insight for thwarting future attacks.”
And here’s the score. On a readability grading scale from A to E, this one scored an E. More importantly, readable estimates that it is only ‘easily readable’ for 33% of the potential audience.
Theoretically, that means 67% of people will be somewhat challenged to read the above paragraph. Many will simply choose not to and move on to something else.
I would bet that if any one of us ran a café, and we saw 2 out of 3 potential customers line up and then walk away without buying, we would immediately make a change to our business model. Just because we may not be able to see that people aren’t finishing our content, doesn’t mean that it’s not happening to us as well.
As Sawyer points out: Simplifying content might be the way to reach larger audiences. Between the amount of digital noise Americans must endure and the differing abilities of individual readers, too-complex content tends to get lost.
Ensuring your content is more readable makes great business sense because you will engage more potential customers!
In Josh Bernoff’s book about writing clarity, Writing Without Bullshit, a book I highly recommend, he coined the Iron Imperative: Do not waste the reader’s time, and the Golden Corollary: Treat the reader’s time as more valuable than your own.
Very wise words. If we all did that, how much more readable would our cybersecurity content be?
You might be wondering…how did this article score? Not perfectly, but a bit better than the cybersecurity example!
At Altitude, we’re focused on creating content that delivers the ‘most relevant information’, in the shortest amount of time.